Memories

Two characters in a story im working on. The one in the back (one of the main characters) is Tokume Eda and the one in front is Kakeru Eda. (My characters, so don't steal, or i'll be forced to hunt you down and literally kill you. And that's a promise)
Anyways, it'll be an interesting story once im done w/ it. I've been working on it for well over two months now but I still haven't gotten far on it.

Kakeru is wearing something he'd normally wear around the house when having guests over but Tokume is wearing something he'd actually never wear. (He's not much of a formal person)

Critique and comments are welcome!!!